Hook: Talking to more than one person when seeking advice is a better choice

Bridge: seeking more than one persons advice helps you get ideas

Thesis: Talking to more than one person when seeking advice is a better choice because you get to hear the different pieces of advice and which piece is most recommended and it gives you many options of pieces of advice you can take.

Topic sentence: There are multiple opinions of hearing multiple peoples advice.

Supporting detail number 1: you get to hear which piece of advice is most said

Supporting detail number 2: you get to choose from all the opinions

Restate thesis: There are multiple opinions from hearing multiple peoples advice because you get to to hear which piece of advice is most said and you get to choose from all the opinions.

Body paragraph number 2:

Topic sentence: hearing multiple ideas gives you many options of advice you can take.

Supporting detail number 1: you get ideas from other people

Supporting detail number 2: you get multiple opinions

Restate thesis: hearing multiple ideas gives you many options of advice you can take from ideas and multiple opinions.

Concluding paragraph:

Restate thesis: Talking to more than one person when seeking advice is a better choice than talking to only one person because you hear other peoples ideas and opinions and you get to choose which one fits you best.